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TOP TEN WEB WRITING TIPS
Content is the most important part of a web site.
That's because most users come to the web with a
specific goal, task or question. Typically, users aren't
online to read; but rather to search for and gather
information.
Web users scan The most important
thing to
remember when writing for the web is that "less is
more", according to Steve Krug, web guru and author
of the book "Don't Make Me Think"! A Common
Sense Approach to Web Usability".That's because
users
don't read websites - they scan the copy and select
the information they seek.
Benefits of conciseness
According to Krug, the benefits of concise web content
are that it:
Reduces the noise level on the page.
Makes the useful content more prominent.
Allows users to see more of the page at a glance
without scrolling.
So how do you write effective web copy that is concise,
well-written and easy to scan? As many of you know,
it can be a challenge at times!
Top ten tips
Following are the top ten web
writing tips that I review in the web writing training
sessions I conduct, which include key points from
web experts, www.usability.com, and my own
experience writing web copy for clients.
1. Say less and keep copy concise:
Keep copy succinct, then cut, edit, etc.
Keep sentences at 20 words or less.
Keep paragraphs at less than six sentences.
Use 3 to 5 paragraphs per screen (about 150
words).
2. Capture attention by writing fast-paced
copy: Get straight to the point - jump in fast and
simple.
Use short words, short sentences, and short
paragraphs.
3. Put the most useful and relevant content first
(inverted pyramid style):
Provide a quick overview to aid in scanning.
Follow with more detail.
Remove paragraphs, sentences and words that
don't help get the point across.
4. Use bullet points to communicate information
quickly:
Use bullet points only a few times per section.
Avoid using too many bullet points!
5. Use strong, attractive headlines at the top of the
web page.
6. Insert subheads before each paragraph to
enable scanning.
7. Make copy customer-focused:
Speak to the reader directly in a conversational
tone.
Focus on their needs - how can your
products/services benefit them?
8. Compose sentences in active vs. passive
voice.
9. Avoid jargon and define acronyms and
abbreviations so the copy doesn't look like alphabet
soup!
10. Make lists easy for readers to scan and
understand by grouping them into categories.
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Seasons Greetings and welcome to the December
2007 issue of BKM Consulting Insights Newsletter!
This month I provide tips on web writing, e-mailing to
diverse audiences, and writing and sending story
pitches via e-mail to the media. I hope you find the
articles interesting, useful, and most of all insightful!
Happy Holidays!
Barbara K. Mednick
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| PITCHING THE MEDIA VIA E-MAIL |
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Target media outlets and personalize the pitch - those
are the two most important things to remember when
pitching news and feature stories to the media via e-
mail. As many of you know, it is particularly
challenging these days to "break through the media
clutter" to pitch story ideas to
reporters/editors/producers via e-mail.
Not only are they scrambling to cover the news and
meet tight deadlines, they also may have to cover
more stories than before, due to recent local layoffs.
While this isn't the case everywhere, it has made the
job of the PR pro and the reporter more demanding!
Here are the top five tips for achieving media relations
success, which are drawn from my own experience
and from that of the media experts at Bulldog Reporter:
1. Target media outlets and personalize e-mail
pitches to specific reporters/editors/producers.
Make sure you understand what the media
outlet covers, who reports on it, what types of stories
they report on, etc.
2. Pitch your idea to the reporter/editor/producer of
a specific section, column or program.
Know what stories they cover and programs
they air to determine if your story idea is a good fit.
3. Write a compelling e-mail subject line.
The
subject line should read like a headline to capture the
media's attention, but don't make it too cute! Also,
don't put the word "pitch" in the subject line.
4. Don't send attachments and keep the body of
the e-mail short. Most of the time,
attachments
will make the e-mail bounce back. Include links to
related web sites, if appropriate.
5. Bullet point original reporting, research and
statistics in your e-mail pitch. New and
substantiated figures, results and research not only
piques their interest, it can also help the media do
their reporting. But, make sure to avoid sending e-
mails with exclamation points, smiley faces, etc.!
Please contact Barbara Mednick if you're
looking for PR/media relations consulting,
writing or training at 651-486-7007 or
bmednick@bkmconsulting.com.
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| E-MAILING DIVERSE AUDIENCES |
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The explosive growth of the Internet has significantly
increased the number of e-mail messages sent to
people around the world from many different cultures.
That's why you need to ensure message clarity,
sensitivity and format when e-mailing to a diverse
audience.
English often second language Since
English is a second language in
most countries around the world, you need to write
e-mails that are clear, simple, and concise. But, how
can you do that effectively?
This is an issue that sometimes arises when I
conduct e-mail writing training sessions. Recently, I
had the opportunity to interview Roger
Prestwich, Ph.D., associate professor and
director, International Business Program and College
of Management at Metropolitan State University on this
subject for a Star Tribune JOBS article.
Key e-mail challenges
"The sheer volume of e-mails makes it increasingly
difficult for your e-mail to stand out from the rest," says
Prestwich. Another challenge is getting e-mails
noticed. "Your e-mail needs to grab attention, but don't
be too clever or it will look like spam."
Need for cultural sensitivity As our world
becomes increasingly diverse, it's important to be
sensitive to other cultures in e-mail messages. "With
notable exceptions, English
is a second language in most countries around the
world, so you need to be sensitive to that when writing
e-mails," advises Prestwich.
Legal issues
"If you have high quality language skills (Spanish,
French, Chinese, etc.), use them in your e-mails. But,
when it comes to anything contractual, always write
the message in English as well as the other
language, with the caveat that the English version is
the one that counts legally," he says.
Choose words carefully The International
Association of Business Communicators also
recommends choosing words carefully when
communicating with international audiences.
Avoid ambiguity IABC advises replacing
business/technical jargon and
idioms with more familiar, everyday words. For
example, instead of using "win-win", use "mutually
agreeable". Also, avoid ambiguity by eliminating
words with multiple meanings.
Say what you mean
"Say exactly what you mean and don't assume that
either party should be reading between the lines. Also,
don't expect politically correct use of English in
e-mails from outside the U.S.," says
Prestwich. "Develop a thick skin and don't be too
easily offended."
Strategies for success
Prestwich offers the following success strategies for
e-mailing to diverse audiences:
- Use a standard, fairly formal style and tone --
informality could be seen as disrespectful.
- Focus on one topic per sentence and don't use
compound sentences.
- Avoid sending confidential information until a
strong relationship is established with the other party.
Take your time Finally, one doesn't have
to respond immediately to e-mails. "Remember, you
can take the time to craft a measured, considered
response to a question," he says.
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| QUOTE OF THE MONTH |
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"Don't limit yourself. Many people limit themselves
to what they think they can do. You can go as far as
your mind lets you. What you believe, you can
achieve."
-- Mary Kay Ash
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| ABOUT BKM CONSULTING INC. |
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BKM Consulting, Inc. provides strategic thinking,
compelling copy and creative solutions. Services
include strategic public relations, marketing
communications and communications training
services. BKM Consulting, Inc. provides services to a
variety of clients, with a specialty in higher education.
Contact Barbara K. Mednick at 651-486-7007 or at
bmednick@bkmconsulting.com.
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